English Translation Game 遊戲英譯

Translate the following title into English:

文字細思量※書中日月長

The answer has come to be:

"Writing words with careful thoughts;

Reading books in endless time."

The new game is to improve on this translation.

New version no. 1:

Write with careful thoughts. Read into endless time.

New version no. 2:
Write careful words ※ Read forever books.

Other versions from player no. 1- R.J.

Writing with careful consideration. Reading for an endless quest.

Player no. 2 -Stone

Carefully Writing; Everlasting Books.

Player no. 3 -B.

Written words, carefully measured
Amidst composition...days, months it endures.

Thank you for playing along!